Author Topic: That Moment - by OriginalTwo  (Read 5872 times)

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That Moment - by OriginalTwo
« on: September 24, 2007, 02:15:48 AM »
So, springs are finally loosening, you haven’t fallen in a while and as soon as you get the hang of the two footed jumps you'll be back flipping in no time. The sun is out, people are staring in awe and your in the clouds, literally.

As you slowly start to jog, testing the spring, waiting for that extra push. You feel the fibres start to take you as having the bocks on slowly starts to feel natural. You pick up speed as the wind brushes your shirt, you feel like Schumacher hasn't experienced speed. Your pads are left strewn across the floor, you have no need for safety when you are an expert.

The spring stops bending as you feel the force pushing through your leg, your hoof slowly begins to leave the ground and it isn't about to go back down soon as the nine foot stride target seems to be closer than ever. Then you have the moment, that nanosecond of space. You don't know if your going to drop or just stay there, suspended in your own atmosphere, you pay no attention to the toddler, his object of fascination for the next week found. You slowly lower your leg as the moment has gone, a chrystal memory, that split second where you have nothing on your mind, you just enjoy.

And from this high, brings a low. The landing. You have been so absorbed with your run that looking down has not occurred to you and the stench of the rotting leaves has evaded your senses. The hoof, unable to find grip, scrabbles’ around, desperately trying to find a hold on the mass of the green-brown trap. As you start to register a problem the bock slips forward, the shin pressing up and the thigh down. You feel intense pressure then a sudden release. You are ok, until the pain hits, you cannot move, colour drained as you stay frozen. A break.

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Re: That Moment - by OriginalTwo
« Reply #1 on: September 24, 2007, 12:01:48 PM »
I really enjoyed reading this story. Very Well written, well done.
« Last Edit: September 24, 2007, 12:03:39 PM by WM »

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Re: That Moment - by OriginalTwo
« Reply #2 on: October 29, 2007, 08:48:04 PM »
its like shakespere on bocks! :D i want mine more than ever now! well done!

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Re: That Moment - by OriginalTwo
« Reply #3 on: October 30, 2007, 01:12:34 PM »
Makes me never want to go near them again! Haha

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Re: That Moment - by OriginalTwo
« Reply #4 on: November 15, 2007, 01:11:20 AM »
:oouch o_O :o

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Re: That Moment - by OriginalTwo
« Reply #5 on: November 27, 2007, 09:33:46 PM »
I'll be always on the watch out for these leaves now  :o

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Re: That Moment - by OriginalTwo
« Reply #6 on: November 27, 2007, 09:59:08 PM »
Leaves are all mainly gone now!!


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Re: That Moment - by OriginalTwo
« Reply #7 on: November 28, 2007, 12:45:02 AM »
i jumped onto some grass from concrete tonight and had both of them sip under me, they slid in about 3 inch of trouser browning mud until one locked and i had some vague thought about staying up, a few steps ater and i was aughing about another "wobble"

“Life is not a journey to the grave with intentions of arriving safely in a pretty well-preserved body, but rather to skid in broadside, thoroughly used up, totally worn out and loudly proclaiming ... WOW! What a ride!”

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Re: That Moment - by OriginalTwo
« Reply #8 on: November 28, 2007, 12:48:54 AM »
i jumped onto some grass from concrete tonight and had both of them sip under me, they slid in about 3 inch of trouser browning mud until one locked and i had some vague thought about staying up, a few steps ater and i was aughing about another "wobble"

I have skidded on sand, on tarmac, and managed to stay up!!  ;D I had to with about 20 to 30 bockers watching me!! lol


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Re: That Moment - by OriginalTwo
« Reply #9 on: November 28, 2007, 01:10:33 AM »
yeah nothing like presure to motivate

“Life is not a journey to the grave with intentions of arriving safely in a pretty well-preserved body, but rather to skid in broadside, thoroughly used up, totally worn out and loudly proclaiming ... WOW! What a ride!”

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Re: That Moment - by OriginalTwo
« Reply #10 on: January 16, 2008, 03:06:44 AM »
the worst thing about falling over is doing it infront of other bockers lol

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Re: That Moment - by OriginalTwo
« Reply #11 on: January 16, 2008, 10:32:23 PM »
That was so cool. Really descriptive. Love it :thumbs:

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Re: That Moment - by OriginalTwo
« Reply #12 on: January 16, 2008, 10:40:06 PM »
the worst thing about falling over is doing it infront of other bockers lol

Especially in front of the EA Bockers, lol


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Re: That Moment - by OriginalTwo
« Reply #13 on: January 16, 2008, 11:31:34 PM »
I slipped on a conquer after iu squished it, that was annoying. O and i remember falling over in front of buckingham palace @ CB...man that was embarassing... :-[  :D

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Re: That Moment - by OriginalTwo
« Reply #14 on: January 17, 2008, 02:21:02 AM »
If im right you split your trousers at capital bockin to choc lol  :laugh:

@ nutta yea the EA's are probly the worst to fall over infront of lol